This is a WIP panel from the comic. I'm hoping that the panels read well and things don't come off as stale or just bad. I'd like it to have a cinematic quality, so i've been studying/watching movies lately. So far I'm finding backgrounds to be a pain in the butt, i'd like to chuck them all together. People read comics for the story anyway, right?
This particular part is in the begining when two soldiers are behaving badly.